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Another rejection today. That makes six since late August and what's today? The fourth of September? Okay, not worried, not worried...keep writing.

The latest rejection made me laugh a little because you see, the story began as a kind of purge of some icky-ness that was my violent childhood. All but a sentence in the middle and the very last paragraph were true (the names had been changed to protect the guilty). It was a horror piece, sent to a horror market, and unlike reality, I added what I hoped would appear to be a twist at the end, an extra stab to the reader's heart.

My personalized rejection, which I love and am very thankful for receiving, said while my characters and dialog were strong, the story had no plot and the end was predictable.

Predictable. I had to laugh because if I had known that time in my life was predictable, I probably wouldn't have had to have all that therapy!

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[info]bogwitch64 wrote:
Sep. 5th, 2008 01:44 pm (UTC)
***Hugs***

It must have given you a noire little chuckle, huh.
[info]cscole wrote:
Sep. 5th, 2008 10:07 pm (UTC)
Exactly! :)
[info]thirdworld wrote:
Sep. 5th, 2008 03:54 pm (UTC)
We humans are predictable. When I look back at all the ways my behavior was predictable because I was going through tough times, well it's annoying :P. But these days I'm okay with it.

Have you considered writing straight-up nonfiction?
[info]cscole wrote:
Sep. 5th, 2008 10:06 pm (UTC)
Nonfiction? Nope, never thought about it. Don't know enough about it to know if I'd be any good at it. Hmm, now you've got me thinking...
[info]thirdworld wrote:
Sep. 5th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
Look up creative nonfiction, essentially telling trues stories in a more traditional (i.e. grab the reader and hold their attention) way. Very enjoyable form of writing.

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